he said to you "i can live without you and you can live without me but she can't live without us" and you and him both knew that she was your best friends and she loved him but he loved you but both you and him wanted her to be happy so you guys let your relationship and happiness go just so she could be happy you guys made her so happy but whenever he saw you and you saw him both of you where really upset even though you and him didn't know it she could tell by the way he looked at you she notice it and she knew if she stayed with him he wouldn't be happy anyways because she knew no matter how hard she tries he wouldn't love her the same way he loved you and she knew it hurt them so much to be apart from each other and it hurt her even more to know she was the one making them hurt the next day she send you both a letter telling you too she could tell that you both still love each other and she didn't wanted to mess up your relationship no more and if she kept this up no one would be happy not you, not him, and not even her because she knows no matter how hard she tries he will never love her the same way he loves you he went looking for you every where when he had finished reading that letter and you went looking for him it was almost 10:00 pm and still you and him haven't found each other yet and you began to think maybe you too don't belong together after all for some reason he and you went to the same place that night and that place was where you two first met he was coming from one side and you from the other both of you looked up at that very moment and your eyes meet he ran as fast as he could to you and you did the same when he got to you he picked you up raped him in his arms and spun you around as you where holding onto his neck kissing him softy on his lips he put you down and asked you " why are you here?" you answered "i gotta letter from her" he smiled and said "i did too" and you smiled at him back but what you both didn't know was she was their crying tears but she wasn't upset she was happy for you two but it hurt her so much more than it should have but no matter how much it hurt her she was still happy for the both of you.... "a story of three best friends carrying for one another so much that even thought what they did might hurt them they put their friends first in everything just so the other one could be happy once again" please tell me what you think of my story if you like it or not or you know just stuff-blush2
You should try using punctuations. It was so difficult to read. Too much drama.... is this your own story?
i'm sorry. i couldn't follow it at all. there aren't any punctuations. it's like one looooooong paragraph of words smashed together.
Well michelle, at least you tried. Just use punctuations next time. It's all a learning process. Don't give up. Keep trying.
This story some reason reminded me of a Korean movie...is this your real life experience? By the way it was really hard to read. Don't give up! Keep trying! Practice makes perfect!
So sad... cause i kno how this feels... hard to follow some of your writing tho haha its very touching keep it up
