Essay

Discussion in 'School Work Help' started by 3liminator, Sep 29, 2009.

  1. 3liminator

    3liminator Well-Known Member

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  2. KaY_xD

    KaY_xD 但願人長久,千里共嬋娟

    are there any specific requirements given? otherwise i think its not bad, u got the ideas flows well, each issues are introduced in a pretty good order. i was thinkin some of the dialogue is lil bit too long, idk thats my opinion.
     
  3. [mJ9]

    [mJ9] Well-Known Member

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    My essays are totally different from yours..
     
  4. matethemouse

    matethemouse Well-Known Member

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    I wouldn't call it a essay, more a short story (just a point).
    The beginning and end work good, but the parts with the conversations "sounds" a bit weird/unnatural, where the co-workers talks more like a "professor" trying to teach you what the consequences of climate/planet-lab are.
     
  5. AC0110

    AC0110 Let the Fun Begin

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    Even though this is 2 weeks ago and you probably handed in -_-
    But you need to be more specific what type of essay it might be...
    Whether it's a research essay or argument essay, etc, each type has their own format
     
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    John wiliamz Member

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  7. Faid1992

    Faid1992 New Member

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    This is actually not bad. Like the the best, but not the worst either. I think you could edit it a bit and who knows, maybe you will get high grade. But if you are totally not down to continue you can use help of professional writers. Here is college essay writing help. Have a nice day and good luck with studying!