Poem-is this love?

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by weedpeach, Apr 22, 2007.

  1. weedpeach

    weedpeach Well-Known Member

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    Is This Love?

    The sadness inside my heart is all because of him.
    There’s a part of me that’s happy and a part that’s sad.
    I never feel safe until I see his face.
    I’ll feel I’m his guardian angel that’s always looking after him and trying to know more about him.
    I want to know why he’s so protective.
    What reasons made him smile and what made him mad?
    How come I feel sad when he’s sad?
    Wherever I go, I want to see his face
    Why?
    Is it because I’m his guardian angel?
    Because I care?
    Because I feel that’s what I should do as a friend?
    Or is it because I love him?
    Why?
    What made me care about him?
    He’s never done anything for me.
    He even thinks I’m annoying.
    What is the answer?


    written by the one and only ME! -^_^
    errmmm and please dont steal this poem..
    thanks
     
  2. weedpeach

    weedpeach Well-Known Member

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    how sadd... nobody comments...... TT____TT
     
  3. pacho

    pacho Active Member

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    don't be sad.
    why do you "love" him if he's done nothing for you and thinks you're annoying?
    you might be setting yourself up for something painful..
     
  4. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    Not bad, just need some brush up. -^_^
     
  5. WilliamStorm

    WilliamStorm Well-Known Member

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    Hmmmm~~ I agree with Pacho~~ it might be a tough one, but guess u gotta make that decision of what to do... does he know about it?
     
  6. Phoenix

    Phoenix *~Though she be but little, she is fierce~*

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    I like your poem by da way..we may not kno its love..but in our minds n actions, we act and feel because of love and for love..so i hope u get the love n happiness you deserved...=)
     
    #6 Phoenix, May 10, 2007
    Last edited: May 12, 2007
  7. weedpeach

    weedpeach Well-Known Member

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    yay!! thanks..
    and you guys are correct. i dunno why i liked him if he doesnt like me back. and yes he does know, because i confessed to him and he rejected.
    which thinking back, i now do regret it because he isnt worth it.
    thanks for the comments. =D
     
  8. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    Remember that there's always a sunny day after the rain. -^_^
     
  9. x3-yuu

    x3-yuu Active Member

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    hmmms
    maybe make the poem a bit shorter to sound better.?
    just a thought..
     
  10. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    The poem isn't that good..... hehe jz being honest -^_^

    Sorry :(
     
  11. brown_bear

    brown_bear ☆‧° ☆﹒﹒‧ ☆ ﹒﹒‧☆‧° ☆

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    ^ are you fishing for compliments about your poem there babyrain -lol -hug
     
  12. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    ^Lol no lea... :X
     
  13. O.O

    brutal b-rain, just BRUTAL!! lol
     
  14. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    At least I don't SKIM people's posts... and declare that i READ them.
     
  15. ^ burned.... hard.... you got me... lol
     
  16. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Remember that a woman keeps grudges for a long long long long time...
     
  17. .......... -flow???
     
  18. BabyRain

    BabyRain Doppelgänger of da E.Twin

    Wut is that??? Look at ur sig Dann...
     
  19. don

    don ello

    once again dann....the robot got you lol -lol
     
  20. damn.... wtf........ owned again...