Lost love poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by lovinglyxx, Apr 30, 2008.

  1. lovinglyxx

    lovinglyxx Well-Known Member

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    We argue every night and every day,
    You disliked anything I had to say.
    We'd fight since the break of dawn,
    You would even kick me out into the lawn.

    But now those days are no more,
    If I knew, I'd change for sure.
    I'd make the image of you more memorable,
    And wish I'd acted that bit more sensible.

    Even though you have gone,
    you'll always be my number one.
    No matter how long it'll be,
    I always hope you'll remember me.

    I miss seeing that wonderful smile,
    Just to recapture it I'd run miles.
    The only image I have is within my mind,
    This is, beautiful, intelligent, sweet and kind.

    You took care of me every since the day I was born,
    But it is now I who is seeing you mourn.
    I don't know why I'd grow up and become like this,
    And now I regret all the times we had missed.

    It's taken too long for me to realise,
    That you were always the one who'd listen to my cries,
    And now it's just far too late,



    To tell my grandma...
    I wasn't about hate.


    [©2006-2008 ~jaevi deviantart]
     
  2. bbes

    bbes Incredible

    oh another poem, cool. keep it up!
     
  3. mikeyh

    mikeyh Well-Known Member

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    nice poem hope to see another one someday
     
  4. awww, grandma's...... but mine were very nice to me =P

    very good poem!
     
  5. lovinglyxx

    lovinglyxx Well-Known Member

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    thanks guys :) but this poem is entirely fictional!!!.. just made it up a few years ago wen i was in a poetry phase lol :b
     
  6. bbes

    bbes Incredible

    even so the poem is rele nice i think, i like the rhyming basically lol.
     
  7. tiffystars

    tiffystars Well-Known Member

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    you've got talent :)
     
  8. jeffereymin

    jeffereymin Member

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    nice poem.
    and i really liked what tiffystars said "life isnt about waiting for the storm to pass...its learning to dance in the rain"
    well done guys
     
  9. Supertrio

    Supertrio Well-Known Member

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    Wow, very nice poem !!
     
  10. champ91

    champ91 Well-Known Member

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    #10 champ91, Nov 28, 2009
    Last edited: Mar 12, 2011
  11. dragonluve

    dragonluve Member

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    nice poem ...
     
  12. bebe234

    bebe234 Member

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    nice poem