i actually write songs instead

Discussion in 'Performers' started by sean222, Jun 17, 2007.

  1. sean222

    sean222 Well-Known Member

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    lol...heres a song i wrote....but it's very dark....i guess

    Have no faith within myself,
    Every breath I take gets deeper to serve me well,
    Growing impatient all along,
    Look up at the sky to see what I’ve done wrong,

    Scraping concrete with my nails,
    Agonizing selfishly bleeding on my own,
    Broken down so I adore,
    Every spit I swallow bitterly in tar,

    Nowhere to go,
    Cuz I’m lost in self confusion,
    Breaking my wall,
    It’s too dark to hide alone,

    The lights turn off when it’s time,
    For every inch the devil comes feeding on my mind,
    My closets the darkest enemy,
    Shadows wake upon that set my chains free,

    Running for days,
    I found a place to call my own,
    Gets dark tonight,
    I don’t need no motivation,
    Escaping from me another way to find what was left behind,
    Having lost myself into a wrecked world it’s cold, it’s dark, dark and cold…

    They gave me a chance to stand again,
    Before I got to the top I saw we all pretend,
    The truth’s as shallow as my own,
    Raged in many differences since I lost my home,

    But now I’ve got nowhere to go,
    I’ve been lost in self confusion,
    I’ve broken the wall,
    I’m alone and it’s still too dark to hide again.
     
  2. ninesixthree

    ninesixthree Active Member

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    nice lyrics but its better if u can sing it...hehe
     
  3. Knoctur_nal

    Knoctur_nal |Force 10 from Navarone|

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    ya gota up yaself spittin them tunes
     
  4. kdotc

    kdotc 안녕하세요빅뱅K-Dragon입니다

    whers the rhymes? lol
     
  5. how does the melody go??
     
  6. sean222

    sean222 Well-Known Member

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    ya usually i can write the words, but finding the melody i cant do that...i dont have any music background, but i have taken vocal classes.....
     
  7. wind2000

    wind2000 Self Schemata

    It strikes me as a poem more than a song. But good composition nonetheless.
     
  8. nyckeion

    nyckeion ....Boo....

    should really try making it into a song
     
  9. honkiebonkie

    honkiebonkie Well-Known Member

    i think everyone wants you to sing it! go PA recording thread~! -lol
     
  10. applex3

    applex3 Well-Known Member

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    It would be better if you sang..wats the tune like..?
     
  11. ProjectD

    ProjectD VIP yay :]

    gotta hear the tune to know man
     
  12. m0n3yt4k3r

    m0n3yt4k3r Member

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    same here.. it hink that too... lol. you should play around with a msuic program i.e. sibelius or overture. =P
     
  13. Phil

    Phil 香港 PA 社團 揸Fap 人

    lol its a rap right?
     
  14. brown_bear

    brown_bear ☆‧° ☆﹒﹒‧ ☆ ﹒﹒‧☆‧° ☆

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    MEBE YOU SHOULD...TOO.....
     
  15. BigC

    BigC Well-Known Member

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    pretty good song/poem... it would be kind of difficult though to put the song into a melody though...