Help on my poem? ITS A PHOENIX! XD

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  1. dieu25

    dieu25 Well-Known Member

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    PHOENIX
    Sol Lumen

    Sacred bird of myth and legend,
    Cultures of mortals, do depend
    God of sol and wings of gold
    Tears of mending, tales have told

    The dreams of life, the hope he brings,
    Soars through the heavens with blazing wings.
    Image of fire, magic within,
    Illusions and thoughts, where has he been?

    Time has passed, the bird doth sing,
    Engulfed in flame, we lost our king.
    Took to ash, but to rise again
    Soar the skies in his reign.

    COPYRIGHT OF DIEU25

    any help or comments would be sweet
     
  2. devil123

    devil123 Banned

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    whats that?
     
  3. devil123

    devil123 Banned

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    hhaha i dontt
     
  4. devil123

    devil123 Banned

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    phhh mr
     
  5. dieu25

    dieu25 Well-Known Member

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    wut do u mean "wuts that"?
     
  6. Hubjub

    Hubjub Well-Known Member

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    lol.....
     
  7. Soar the skies in his reign...
    Light ya ass on fire and brings the pain..
    faster than a speeding bullet.. faster than a train
    Phoenix vs. Dragon which one be betta?
    body ablaze burn thru ya retina..
    here's another story untold.
    flight of the Phoenix in the sky so bold
    use it as a heater for these days so cold
    light up a barbecue shittin out fiery coal.. -lol

    hey I believe phoenix is a she??
     
  8. Hubjub

    Hubjub Well-Known Member

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    ????????????????