drsnoopy's poetry

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by drsnoopy, Apr 26, 2008.

  1. drsnoopy

    drsnoopy Well-Known Member

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    Last night I dreamt of a wonderful world,
    a wonderful world that was kept.
    It’s not hard to imagine what could have happened,
    if a different hand was dealt.

    What could have been
    would have been
    really fun times, are a figment of my imagination,
    for when I look at the images of my comerades,
    I’m missing from the picture.

    Have you ever wondered if you could do something over again,
    if you had that chance but didn’t take it,
    would you take that chance if you had another try,
    but the drawback could be failure again.
    Would you still take it or rather be left
    with forever wondering what and how it might have been.

    To be the tortured soul as I am still now,
    please heed my warning
    a tale of faultered youth - - -
     
  2. bbes

    bbes Incredible

    does this poem represent u? its pretty gd.
     
  3. drsnoopy

    drsnoopy Well-Known Member

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    perhaps...

    i just write.
     
  4. drsnoopy

    drsnoopy Well-Known Member

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    the Flu

    What do you do when the sun is outside
    and all you want to do is sleep in and hide
    you look out the window and you can only sigh
    i'm sick, i'm sick with a fever it's chilling
    the room is spinning and I'm puking...i'm puking

    I cough and I cough, I pant and I heave,
    I can't do anything, can't move, powerless to leave.
     
  5. drsnoopy

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    Not As it Always Appears: The Response

    My friends they all tell me that they wish she was you,
    But it doesn't make sense as why you're so blue,
    Is it because you still miss him, you're former boo?
    Otherwise it doesn't make sense, I've stayed true.
    My face lights up when I see your smile,
    But you haven't even done that for a while.
    The heartache that you feel, I feel it too
    Dreams of the pleasure we had, or we once knew
    Float away, making it harder, but not strained
    Because I love you still enough to numb your pains.
    So you can't get your story straight, it's fine,

    You can tell me when you're ready, the truth in time.

    I want to see you.

    I want you to stop pretending, I want to see you,
    I want to see the real girl, not the shady you.
    Take off that mask, that front that you put on,
    I didn't fall in love with that, it's just too wrong.
    I see you from the outside, this glass wall you put up,
    Though nobody can really see you, girl, what's up?
    There is no door, I want to come inside,
    Help me break down these walls, no longer hide.
    You're slowly killing me, that may be true,
    However we can fix this, let me know you.
    Drowning in lies, I can pull you out,
    Breathe life into you, spit the water out.
    Let the past behind you, the future is now,
    Let me show you love, you're shown me how.
    I drop down to my knees, my hands holding yours,
    It's okay to cry, you're safe now, let there be no more blood.
    The love that we share will give you new life, and new blood.
    Longing for lust, I only have love here,
    Let truth be your guide, have no fear.
    Let us turn back the clock, and rewind,
    Back when we first met, and you were mine.
    However take off that mask, no longer pretend,
    I care for you, love you, I'm more than your friend.
    If you drop to your knees, I will too,
    I need you to know that I care for you.
    It's not a matter of anything, the truth, no lie,
    As long as you love back, our love won't die.
     
  6. Knoctur_nal

    Knoctur_nal |Force 10 from Navarone|

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    snoops showin that other side.
     
  7. drsnoopy

    drsnoopy Well-Known Member

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    yup. you caught me. :p