Admiration

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by WhiteBlaster, Feb 21, 2007.

  1. WhiteBlaster

    WhiteBlaster Active Member

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    Beautiful sky
    Where whitish clouds dwell
    Upon the horizon,
    Swiftly moving westward.

    Day and night appear
    Changed its lovely colors,
    Bright and dark
    Surround the greenish Earth.

    A new day arrives
    Light shine warmly on
    A lovely face;
    Images are getting more vivid to perceive.

    Searching carefully on an elegant face,
    A cold wind shivers my bones,
    Gives me an annoying headache;
    Within minutes, it fades away like smoke.

    Motionless as I sit
    Mirror reflects my identity,
    A look I would admire in the world,
    My individual appearance.
     
  2. chi-bi-rain

    chi-bi-rain Active Member

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    really beautiful text.
     
  3. WhiteBlaster

    WhiteBlaster Active Member

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    Thanks for the compliment. :p
     
  4. taxi01

    taxi01 Active Member

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    nice poem..
     
  5. snowangel

    snowangel Active Member

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    one word, Beautiful......