Smile.

Discussion in 'Fan Fix' started by goeatc, May 7, 2008.

  1. goeatc

    goeatc Well-Known Member

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    Smile


    It seemed like a normal day,
    everything old and plain,
    nothing new to say,
    only the usual “Hi” and “Hey”

    But it was different today,
    I noticed something new,
    Something I only find,
    In a lot less than a few.

    Your lips spread apart,
    and you let your smile shine,
    At that moment I knew,
    I just had to make you mine.

    Just some random inspiration after seeing a wonderful smile that just made my day
    I don't know why, but first thing I look for in a girl is their smile, haha. .
    A tad short, but let me know what you guys think !
     
  2. drsnoopy

    drsnoopy Well-Known Member

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    not bad. but call this post goeatc poetry
     
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    lol all these sweet poems...where them tough love poems at.....SEX makes a poem good, except the gay shit hahaha....
     
  4. AsianInvasion

    AsianInvasion Well-Known Member

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    That was pretty good haha xD
     
  5. goeatc

    goeatc Well-Known Member

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    haha thanks :p
     
  6. xmichelly

    xmichelly Well-Known Member

    oooh the poem is so sweeeet

    haha you know you want some of that :xd:
     
  7. bbes

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    rofl, why u involving sex into this topic. so dirty minded.
     
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    i'm cool like that mishy....-tongue2

    don't like the sex? .....someone likes that gay shit then... :laugh2:
     
  9. bbes

    bbes Incredible

    actually gay shit is worse and even more disgusting.
     
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    lol so no gay shit or sex.....then fappin is the way to go handoff1 :laugh:
     
  11. goeatc

    goeatc Well-Known Member

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    i have no idea how gay shit or sex is involved in this. -noclue
     
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    lol i'm just fucking with u man....hahah -lol continue with yo writing
     
  13. xmichelly

    xmichelly Well-Known Member

    lol oh my, sex just somehow manages to find its way into every thread
     
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    and mishy is always:rolleyes2: there to spot it...-tongue2